[deutschlanderin and Kayderyn rp]

[kayderyn]

Plot:
War between the Americans and their allies and the Germans and thier allies for years, however it went wrong when the Germans found a portal that would help them go back in time. This portal however, did not take them back in time. The portal opened a second world, and taking over the real world. The military was overcome by the beasts, and after 10 years they began to recruit these beings in their armies. The skills of the (elves, fairies, etc) were clashing, war was amongst them.

Character Creation:

Name:
Age:
Rank:
Gender:
Personality:
Appearance:
Special Skills:

[kayderyn]

Name: Gregory Schoonoff
Age: 54
Rank: German General
Gender: Male
Personality: Generous, Caring, Stuck Up, Stuck in his ways, tactical genious
Appearance: Tall, lanky, skinny, gray hair, brilliant green eyes, some muscles but not much
Special skills: Tactical genious, able to understand all languages and converse with any race

[kayderyn]

Old Gregory was leaning on the tree near the portal. No one ever noticed him. He was just there to observe all the creatures and to keep to himself. He had plans for later in the day. He was to return to the German camp and report on what he had learned that day.

[deutschlanderin]

Name:Werner
Age: 27
Rank: Kapitänleutnant (Lieutenant)
Gender: male
Personality: Friendly, sarcastic, short-tempered; pessismistic and sometimes self-absorbed
Appearance: short brown hair, crooked nose, average build (whatever that is) greenish-brownish eyes
Special Skills: wit and fighting skills (at least I hope so, he's a soldier)

[kayderyn]

(good job that is a really good description and you made the personality traits well)

[deutschlanderin]

"It's quiet," muttered Hofstrand, wiping at his grimy forehead with a tattered sleeve. "The shelling's stopped."
"Uh huh," Werner sank back against the bank and prayed that the ringing in his ears would cease. The racket of enemy shelling always gave him such an awful headache. "When did the General say he'd get back?"
"He didn't," replied Hofstrand with a tiny laugh. "Y'know, the man's a genius. Almost as good as Field Marshal Rommel himself. But he's an odd one, has some interesting quirks. Guess that's why he's leading us here, and not where Rommel is."
"I like him," said Werner. "Odd he may be, but interesting generals are better than the dull drill sergeants. I had a commander at camp like that once. What a scheisskopf."
He shut his eyes, and pinched the bridge of his nose. The headache left him feeling even more tired. He sighed.
"He's back!" piped a voice. "The General's back!"
"Took him long enough," grumbled Werner, scrambling gingerly to his feet.
"Oh, stop whining," admonished Hofstrand cheerfully. "Let's go find out what he has to say."

[kayderyn]

(its good but role playing is more about details and less about the dialogue.....and it's alot easier to start with one character and use him and interact with other people.....everything needs to be detail oriented...you control the character you make.....and you interact with other people........like my character.)

[deutschlanderin]

Oooh, ok. Sorry, that's just the writing nazi in me.
Um, so... hmm. I'm not sure how to get started with this one.

[The Chels]

((dear member; please write any out of character comments in this format with the parenthesis; it avoids confusing. thank you ))

[deutschlanderin]

Werner shrugged and followed the other men back to the camp. He tugged his helmet off, and scratched at the back of his head, through all the sweat and matted hair and dried mud. He leaned against a tent beam, and closed his eyes. The headache was beginning to ebb, perhaps he could finally catch up on some sleep...
"Werner!" a large hand clapped onto his shoulder, jerking him back into grudging consciousness.